About Prologue-01
News-151028
Well, to be honest, I'm quite surprised that comments, thought not in huge numbers, came in as early as having them in less than a day. A lot of which are quite alarming, some really pumps me up!
Don't get me wrong about the "alarming" part, I'm really thankful for pointing the mistakes out. It's just that, as I've read the comments and reviewed [Prologue-01] I was like; "Oh, snap! I didn't know that!" and started to make changes.
Anyways, in regards to [Prologue-01], I've made revisions. Not just simply moving of certain areas to another, but to change the piece ranging from the regrouping of sentences to minor changes in the dialogues and/or monologues.
I'll be posting the revised [Prologue-01] then [Prologue-02] immediately after publishing this one. Once again, please feel free to comment any mistakes and/or suggestions on how I can make my web novel better.
Ok...
ReplyDelete